A Critical Analysis Of Donald M. Murray's Article We Read

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In Donald M. Murray's article we read, he discussed how papers were never finished but instead they were just due. When you create any type of writing, it's always evolving. It will continue to evolve until you run out of time and it has to be graded. He says the same thing happens to professionals, their work just gets published instead of a grade. At the end of the writing process, the student is graded on what he has produced in the amount of time given. It doesn’t matter what all of his drafts say, the final grade comes from the time limited paper.
Murray uses a specific construction for this article. He starts by talking about how teachers are teaching writing. He gives examples of how they need to teach and how it will help when it all

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