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They made it to the fifth floor by elevator and found room 509.
Before they even got close to it, they were able to hear crashing and banging sounds, including screams.
“There’s a girl trapped in there!” Ray told the three, and they ran toward the woman’s door.
Ray tried opening the door, thinking it could be unlocked.
“Ray,” Peter started. “This is a hotel. You need a keycard to get it opened.”
Ray brushed his hand through his hair in a worried manner. “Right, I wasn’t thinking about that. But we don’t have time to go back down and get a card.”
“We could use these.” Egon suggested, indicating the Proton Packs.
“Well, that is easier than breaking our shoulders or ankles,” Peter agreed.
The three got out of Egon’s way as he set his particle thrower to the lowest setting and
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“Don’t you have any respect for women?”
“We gotta get the ghost to drop the desk before he kills her!” Stantz warned noticing the blood and bruises on her. “Pete! Winston! Set your throwers on medium and blast that table away from her! Egon, try capturing the spirit! I’ll roll out the trap once you two blasted away the desk!”
Everyone did as he said, but before he even got a chance to open the trap, the entity, without having to touch the female, picked her up off the floor and flung her at the glass door of the balcony.
She screamed as she was hurled, and went silent as soon as she hit the glass.
As she was flung, Ray stopped what he was doing and ran as fast as he could to try to catch her before she plummeted to her death.
He caught her by the ankle. He was only able to hold her with one hand so he could hold onto the railing with the other as to not fall forward himself.
Because Ray left without getting a chance to open the trap for his friends, Peter, who was closest to him at the time, hit the foot pedal and the ghost was finally caught, and no longer a threat.
Ray was struggling on keeping his grip on the woman. “Guys! I need some help pulling her

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