18 School Shootings

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The authors of this article made some pretty bold moves in the text. Some of those moves catch the reader's attention or help the reader understand why there were not 18 school shootings and told them the actual number. An example of this throughout the text is located in paragraph 13 and then states how they are considered school shooting. The authors begin to abridge the Everytown list of school shootings because some of these shooting didn’t even take place during school hours or some events happened at a closed school. Near the beginning of the text, the authors intentionally capitalize a conjunction to catch the reader's attention to tell them that there Were Not 18 school shootings in 2018. Just like I did there with the last sentence.

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