The way the passage is organized can sometimes help the reader better understand the story and what’s happening. The dialogue also can help the reader understand what is going or when there is a flashback; words or phrases such as, “I remember.” The way the passage is organized also helps show what kind of relationship William and Hester have through dialogue and a few actions.
In the end of the passage, the reader can tell Hester has respect for William from the statement, “And you be careful of that, an’ don’t waste