Class 1st hour
Fictional Narrative
Final Assessment
It was early on the morning December fifth and we were sledding behind the boarded up Baldwin. It was a great day me and my sister Bess had a lot of fun and it was not too cold and it was fun but then Brian McManus came he was not the nice’s person, some of his friends came and they kept coming closer to us just so we would get scared i wanted to take a break Bess was still sledding and Brian got close again so she turned and was heading towards the tree i thought she was going to move. she didn’t move we rushed her to the hospital where they had to put bandages on her eyes but our uncle Ted, mamma and the doctor were talking i couldn’t really tell what they were talking about but i didn’t
Fictional Narrative
Final Assessment
It was early on the morning December fifth and we were sledding behind the boarded up Baldwin. It was a great day me and my sister Bess had a lot of fun and it was not too cold and it was fun but then Brian McManus came he was not the nice’s person, some of his friends came and they kept coming closer to us just so we would get scared i wanted to take a break Bess was still sledding and Brian got close again so she turned and was heading towards the tree i thought she was going to move. she didn’t move we rushed her to the hospital where they had to put bandages on her eyes but our uncle Ted, mamma and the doctor were talking i couldn’t really tell what they were talking about but i didn’t