Robert Redd Mrs. Akassi English 102 section 01 29 May 2017 Rough Draft Is wearing a Mask a such a harsh punishment, if so is their a reason behind wearing a mask, The man whom may live inside the mask holds a story within him,and he may not be able to live to tell his story if one may keep his identity in vain, so the question is why not take one”s “mask off” to be heard by many like him.? The purpose of this essay is to examine Paul L.Dunbar “We wear the mask” compare to Future’s mask off and compare the feelings and issue that regards to the poet's view about concealing their feelings. In addition, Paul L. Dunbar’s “We wear the mask” in comparison to Future’s “ Mask off” both poets state the issue have experienced throughout their lives
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You did equal or better than 22% of the people in your education level.
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