I love books that use multiple points of views as you get to hear the thoughts and contemplations of multiple characters, but in this story the writer does not use any transitions between point of view. She jumps between one day to the night a week after and the back to the day before, e.t.c. These inopportune perspective changes brought an unexpected mystery to the story, but they also created the wrong type of frustration in the reader. In another attempt to bring interest from multiple readers the author added fantasy to this story. I am a fantasy reader but the magical creatures in this story were inappropriately used and leave the readers disgruntled and confused. As the fantasy of this story played a main part in the main plot twists of this story, I am sorry to say that this story could not survive without it. Although, these plot twist were predictable, annoying, and simply
I love books that use multiple points of views as you get to hear the thoughts and contemplations of multiple characters, but in this story the writer does not use any transitions between point of view. She jumps between one day to the night a week after and the back to the day before, e.t.c. These inopportune perspective changes brought an unexpected mystery to the story, but they also created the wrong type of frustration in the reader. In another attempt to bring interest from multiple readers the author added fantasy to this story. I am a fantasy reader but the magical creatures in this story were inappropriately used and leave the readers disgruntled and confused. As the fantasy of this story played a main part in the main plot twists of this story, I am sorry to say that this story could not survive without it. Although, these plot twist were predictable, annoying, and simply