Personal Narrative: Perfection In The World

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Perfection in the World

I’ve always wanted a perfect world. Between all the hatred and fighting, kidnapping, and murders, there is chaos all around. I swear world peace is possible behind all this corruption. Voices in my head tell me to fix the problem and be the solution. But that was many years ago. Now, things are very different. CNN headline: Terrorist Attack in France, 9 Killed, not one feeling of remorse. Or little girl raped and murdered, she had it coming. I have absolutely no empathy for these people and feel no emotion towards them at all but I wasn’t always like this.

I grew up with my dad, a single parent. My mom left when I was four years old and to this day I don’t know why. The last memories I have of her is watching her
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Now moving on to the important matters. First things first, I must stay very organized and this must go as planned. Whoever gets in the way must go and whoever ruins my perfectly set plan must pay and suffer severe consequences. This must go as planned, must go down perfectly, I have to get rid of these people, I cannot live in a polluted world, it is my duty, I have to, I have to, I have to! I will do everything I can to make this happen. I want to watch these people get punished. It is like watching your favourite show or movie. You can’t stop and you begin to get consumed in it and feel as if you are part of it all. Watching others in pain gives me enjoyment. Complete enjoyment. The second thing I must do, make my wonderful list of people to take out, one by one; a hit list. It will be organized by the type of sinners, with each person’s name recorded in alphabetical order of course so I do not miss anyone. This work takes extreme precision. If I find these people, I will first make them suffer for it gives me great pleasure seeing them scream and hurt because of pain. Then, I will punish them however I feel like it at that time. Need be, they will be as dead as a stone. I will watch from the sidelines with complete enjoyment and satisfaction. This must go down perfectly and can’t get screwed up. When I am done, I will take a big black marker and with joy cross that sinner out. Overall, perfection at its …show more content…
This morning at 6:05 a.m., I woke up to check the list and see the names next on my list. The next three names are Cole Brown - a murder, Heather Miller - a kidnapper…. I’m on the hunt for revenge. These people should never have gotten away with these crimes and it’s time to give them what they deserve. At 6:17 a.m. I go to take a shower and at 6:23 a.m. I get dressed. Then at 6:29 a.m., I lock my door and triple check the lock to make sure the door is securely locked. After, at 6:34 a.m., I’m in my car and on the hunt for my first victim. It’s the same schedule daily and all times are exact. I meticulously make sure that everything follows the order for if I’m ever a minute late, the universe will curse me. I’m on my way to my first victim, Mr Brown. Cole Brown is 46 years old male and a customer service representative. Two weeks ago, he murdered 35 years old, Scott Fox, for not paying him back five thousand dollars that he owed him. Brown disposed his body in the river near his home thinking no one would find it, but I have taken many photos as proof. It is time for Mr Brown to get what he deserves. “Paul, stop, do not do this”, “Shhh! Not now”, it is time to go I’m outside his house. “You cannot do this. You are not making it better by killing him as revenge”, “Simon, Shut up! He killed an innocent man and now he is going to know what it is like”. I walk towards his porch and knock on the door. Using my charms, I will convince him to let me

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