My strengths in this paper were my syntax, sentence structure and overall organization of my essay. I felt that I had an easier time developing my thoughts and using a vast set of vocabulary to not only add credibility but provide a sense of professionalism that was constant through the essay. My organization was very clear and flowed nicely from one topic to another while still supporting my thesis and maintaining my argument. I felt like since I was so invested in the subject of genetic editing it was easy for me to generate ideas and link them all together with my thesis. I wanted to write about genetic editing because I wanted to really understand what it was and how it could change our society. I want people to read this essay not to agree with me or take the opposition, but to become informed and educated on a topic that will one day affect them and our
My strengths in this paper were my syntax, sentence structure and overall organization of my essay. I felt that I had an easier time developing my thoughts and using a vast set of vocabulary to not only add credibility but provide a sense of professionalism that was constant through the essay. My organization was very clear and flowed nicely from one topic to another while still supporting my thesis and maintaining my argument. I felt like since I was so invested in the subject of genetic editing it was easy for me to generate ideas and link them all together with my thesis. I wanted to write about genetic editing because I wanted to really understand what it was and how it could change our society. I want people to read this essay not to agree with me or take the opposition, but to become informed and educated on a topic that will one day affect them and our