I look at this one and how different it is from my first one. I feel this one shows how I evolved as a writer. This response I start with the topic as a whole, instead of going straight into the response and answering the question. Then I go on to explain what happened in the scene. I tell how I felt while reading, how I was surprised I was. I felt I ended the responses on a good note with this one. Not just because I understood the topic, it was because I see where I was on the first few responses and to where I am now. There was less grammar mistakes and I am thankful for
I look at this one and how different it is from my first one. I feel this one shows how I evolved as a writer. This response I start with the topic as a whole, instead of going straight into the response and answering the question. Then I go on to explain what happened in the scene. I tell how I felt while reading, how I was surprised I was. I felt I ended the responses on a good note with this one. Not just because I understood the topic, it was because I see where I was on the first few responses and to where I am now. There was less grammar mistakes and I am thankful for