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(Nico's POV)
I was scared, scared I was going to lose another sister. Will, Jason and Percy swam down to grab her. When they reached her I sensed a death. It was a powerful death, it must've been hers. I force myself to sink to the seabed and shadow travel to Camp Jupiter. I need to tell Hazel, I had to tell her she even existed still. (Hazel's POV) I had just finished cleaning the Pluto temple when Nico shadow traveled in, obviously tired but strong since the war ended. "Nico what are you doing here" I said scrambling to his side making sure he doesn't fall. "Hazel, she d-died," he stated tears running down his face. "Who Nico, Who is 'she'" was my startled response. He placed his hand firmly on my wrist and we melted into the shadows. Turning up in the Hades cabin in Camp Half-blood, I saw that Nico had redone the room. No longer were there coffins and one light to light the whole cabin, but Charcoal walls, 3 king sized beds, each that had light grey bed-sheets and curtains that you could pull around them for privacy. Hold up! Three beds? Did this mean I have a sister. Nico collapsed on a bed which was only one of the two with a nightstand.
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On this nightstand was a picture of Jason, Nico and a Blonde girl in a tree. I knew this wasn't Nico's bed because his nightstand had a picture of him and Bianca. This was our new sister's bed. Nico must have really liked her. But now back to him, he was fast asleep on her bed, I tucked him in and set off to find Jason or Will and find out what happened. ~~~TIMEY-WHIMEY-TIME-SKIP~~~
So I found out that Percy, Annabeth, Leo, Piper, Jason, and Will who is now Nico's boyfriend were in the infirmary wait for my sister to come out of her coma. They all liked her a lot because they didn't speak, not even to tell me her name or what she looked like. So I did the same as them wait, until we heard a noise from inside her room. The door-handle was jiggling but not opening. We all jumped up and surrounded the door when a note slipped under the door. It read,
"Guys, all the doors and windows are locked and it's painful to talk, I will find a way out besides shadow traveling because it is too bright. -Me" We heard nothing after that for a few seconds, until there was a loud crash against the celestial bronze door. We all jumped back with worry. I thought I heard one of them say, "C'mon Death Girl,". Once, twice, and thrice more startling blows to the door but it wouldn't budge. After, we heard a fourth blow and then a body collapsing next to it. This is when it got frantic. Percy, Jason, and Leo all did the same thing my sister tried, while Piper out of insanity tried to Charm-speak the door to open. Annabeth and Will where trying to get the boys away from the door to pick the lock, but without success. This went on for about 5 minutes until we heard feet down from the ceiling. We all turned around with disbelief. (Nico's POV) I woke up in Emma's bed trucked in tightly not knowing how I got there. Had Hazel put me there? It didn't matter, I had lost another one. I wanted comfort, I wanted Will. So I did the only logical thing and went to the infirmary. All of camp was unphased accept I couldn't find Six of the seven and Will. As I stood outside the infirmary I took a deep breath trying to steady my breathing and not to cry. I walked in and stood outside the waiting room where chaos was currently taking place. Everyone was scrambling around the door. I walked in, quietly sticking to the perimeter. Well, until a body dropped out of the vent. I smiled with glee and tears in my eyes. (Emma's POV) I was running, trying to escape. The creature which I dared not to turn back and see was following me. The bright, white hallway stood on forever. I had been

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