Personal Narrative Fiction

Improved Essays
Have you ever been so excited you wish time would speed up and you got so excited you almost pushed you friend of a trampoline well I almost did. It was a normal Saturday my mom was at work me and my dad where home watching the football game. Then my dad told me “Angel go play outside” I say “ok, but why” my dad told me “well I got a surprise for you be back around 7:00” I said “ok”. So I went outside for a while, than my dad said “Angel lets go” so I ran home and we got in my dad’s truck and left. Out of nowhere my dad pulled out tow muskies tickets. We got to the Tyson and I said “dad how did you get those tickets,” he said “it’s a secret. We went in we got a soda and some nachos and we watched the hockey game. I said “dad thank you know

Related Documents

  • Improved Essays

    One sunny and partly cloudy day at about 8pm at night Jimmy got back from football practice walked into his perfectly sized front door for him and his mom greeted him by saying hey, how was football, he responded great mom I think we're going to do amazing this year after I saw how good our offense and defense is this year. A few minutes after they finished their short but sweet conversation he went up to his bathroom to…

    • 1213 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Decent Essays

    One sunny summer day i woke up in my stiff old spring mattress bed with my stained comforter i needed to wash. As i put on my rugged denim wrangler jeans and my old The North Face leather boots, grab my harley davidson t shirt and as i walked on the creaking old wooden floor my Father was watching the 7:30AM NBC news as i walked in i heard and breaking news alert Howard Johnsons boy fell in the old well in town i just thought to myself wow when i was just 4 i fell down that same well and i told them that they should seal it off but they did not. I asked my dad what was for breakfast…

    • 122 Words
    • 1 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    BEEP, BEEEEP, BEEEP!!!!!! My clock goes off. My dad walks into my room to tell me we are leaving for Wisconsin Dells. As dad tells me I said, ¨Oh ok, pack my stuff, I am going back to bed. He left the room.…

    • 573 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    So i was walking home, i was so exited to tell my friends! I was still thinking who i should take tho, i really wish i could take all of them….then i was at my front door. Man i must of been day dreaming the whole time i was walking. So i walked in and went to my room and the first person i called was Jakobie, “Guess what,” I yelled.…

    • 254 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The store was had quite a few customers, but it was finally our turn to be helped we asked polity if we could see the birds section. As we got closer the chirping and the hissing got louder and there they were one light blue one green one white and one yellow all looking at me with their small shiny black eyes. Convincing my dad to let me get the birds was not the hard part it was getting the fear of my mom saying no out of his head. Surprisingly my dad allowed me to get all four birds it didn’t take long to convince him, I knew from the beginning he liked birds as soon as we saw them. After buying all the necessary items and gaining instructions for proper care taking we left the store, I was feeling euphoric, full of laughter and joy.…

    • 758 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    A smirk went across his face as he saw his victim in a vulnerable position. Some would think that was just how he smiled, but everybody who attended Ridgecoast High School knew better than that. At that moment, Trevor was busying himself by ripping up Caleb’s report for science class. “Please, just stop it!” Caleb yelled out.…

    • 774 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    After I ate my breakfast, I ran to the front door, got my shoes on, and went outside to play and run around in the cold, freezing, white blanket of snow. While I was running around in the snow, my parents hollered at me "Ian please come inside, we need to talk to you. I yelled "okay" and went inside. When I got inside, my parents sat down on the couch. " Ian, we are going to have to leave the house for good tomorrow morning" they said…

    • 771 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Superior Essays

    Personal Narrative Fiction

    • 1315 Words
    • 6 Pages

    “This is it,” Seth said. “That’s him, the guy who was with Kayla, she’s got to be around here somewhere. She was frolicking about the entire lobby area for most of the time we all stood in line.” A minute past, but the girl was not seen in the video. Then Seth showed up.…

    • 1315 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Improved Essays

    You could only see half her face; her light brown hair covered the other half. She sat there crying from dawn to dusk. The busy world going throughout their day while only glimpsing her. She had an aura about her that made her invisible to most, maybe it was the way she dressed. No one knew why though, those of us who noticed her, but everyone knew she would be there the same day, every year.…

    • 510 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    There are some events that are so terrifying that you can remember everything about when it happened. For me, that event is when I came out to my mom. She had called me into her room so that I could listen to her read Bible verses condemning homosexuality, which is always a fun time. The room only had one dim light on and the curtains were closed, making the room almost as gloomy as me at the time. Downstairs, I could smell my sisters baking and wished more than anything I could be there instead of where I was: sitting at the edge of the bed, staring at the pile of clothes on the floor as I tried to keep myself from thinking about what she was saying.…

    • 406 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Then I felt wet like I had just got in the shower It was raining again and it got cloudy again we all went back into the classroom. As we all sat down I realized that Margot was still in the closet we all came rushing down I opened the door slowly then even more slowly let out Margot. I could see the disappointment in her face She ran to the window well crying and she put her hands on the window as if she was in a jail cell trying to get out she fell to the ground I came over to her I said, “Are you…

    • 562 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Superior Essays

    Personal Narrative Fiction

    • 1028 Words
    • 5 Pages

    Author's Note : Stay tuned! Amber finally follows her heart and decides what is right for her. P.S. Sorry if I break some of your hearts, but it must be done. Don't worry, I wouldn't count it out for the other guy just yet!…

    • 1028 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Superior Essays

    Personal Narrative Fiction

    • 1663 Words
    • 7 Pages

    I can do this. I am capable. I pick up my bags and begin to fill the trunk of my crappy car with my few crappy belongings. At least I can leave this crappy apartment and crappy husband behind. I run back inside and wake up my sweet Charlotte.…

    • 1663 Words
    • 7 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Improved Essays

    My dad shouted over the stand separating the kitchen and living room, “Oh yes you are!” He sounded kind of happy about that. For about 10 minutes we sat there and ate porkchop and sweet potato with our asparagus pushed up onto the corner of our dinner plates. Finally my dad came in there to see how much we had eaten, and he was not that thrilled. “Eat those” We four (Me, dad, Rheagan, and Jake) sat in there just looking at each other until Rheagan…

    • 472 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Great Essays

    Personal Narrative Fiction

    • 1261 Words
    • 6 Pages

    Don't you ever wondered if I disappeared tomorrow would the world even notice? Am i even going to be remembered? Am i just a cookie crumbs in the bottom of the cookie jar only to be washed out or thrown into the trash can? I get a bit paranoid sometimes and i'm convinced that everyone hates me, my therapist says to talk to her more often or to have a journal to get over my anxiety and my feeling, but i know she is judging me. I know humans.…

    • 1261 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Great Essays