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Adam was haunted by the guilt of almost forgetting his friend. Today, Rodney was a phantom face in buried in a coffin in the back of Adam’s mind. Adam felt an immense guilt from ignoring Rodney and he thought to visit Rodney after school that day. Adam wondered why he felt so uneasy about being alone today. Rodney wasn’t the paradigm of a punctual student and he occasionally skipped school yet today he felt so unsettled like a house on cards in sand. He had such a nice day and it was without Rodney.
Adam appeared to be melting from the inside from anxiety. His eyes were blank in a way that you would think he could see into the universe. He sat hunched over in his seat with his hoodie on to partially hide his face from the world. His backpack
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He walked up the stairs that cried out as he stepped on them. Adam was walking towards the very end of the world as he knew it. It was much darker and colder than it was downstairs. It was saddening. It was unsettling. It was uncomfortable and Adam’s body felt weak. He could not stop shivering and he had grown paler as he walked up the stairs. His color contrasted with the black that was in this pathetic excuse for a home. When finally reached the top of the stairs, the aroma from earlier grew stronger and was almost too much more Adam to bear. Adam wanted to call out to Rodney but his mouth would not allow him to. He felt a strong urge to stop where he was but he kept on moving anyway and went against the foreboding atmosphere reluctantly. The foul smell from earlier was much stronger as he walked closer to Rodney’s door and it was a smell that would even repel starving vultures. His door felt strangely warm and welcoming but it did not provide Adam with a feeling of comfort. In that moment, Adam would have rather been anywhere else; being stuck in traffic with his idiot step-father or being berated by his vindictive mother. Anywhere else was better than there. When Adam opened the door, his biggest fears had been validated and he was all alone. All

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