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Hi. I’m sorry that it took me this long to respond. I was frustrated and angry and I knew that I wasn’t ready to talk to you yet. To be completely honest, I still am but I know that I need to do this in order to move on and leave this all behind. First, I want to say thank you for apologizing. I understand that you were drunk (as was I) and I understand that it can make us act differently in certain situations than if we were sober. I think that there was a lack of communication that night and I am completely willing to take full responsibility if i made it seem that I wanted anything more than to just hang out because that wasn’t the case. Before barn dance, I made sure to tell Lexi that I did not want to hook up with you in any way, shape, …show more content…
I am not here to accuse you of anything or to make you feel bad, but it is definitely not okay to lie about what happened. If you weren’t planning on hooking up with me that night, then why didn’t you listen to me when I said no? Why wouldn’t you let me walk away? When Jamison and Lexi left us, you immediately pushed me towards the woods. I told you I didn’t want to do anything of the sort with you and you completely disregarded me and kept trying to push me into it, even after I said no multiple times. Yes, I gave in. I am not trying to say that I didn’t. You push and push until I give in (and this happens every single time we hang out) which is so wrong Reis. If I say no the first time, it’s no. If I want to do something, I don’t need anyone to try to convince me. And the same goes for you in any situation. If you aren’t comfortable with something, you can say no and no one can tell you that you are wrong for not wanting to do …show more content…
That situation is very messed up from my point of view. I asked you multiple times if I could just do homework and you said yes but once I got to your room, you didn’t even care that I had work to do. I am not sure if you intentionally treat me this way or if you do it unknowingly. You keep reiterating that you respect me and that you don’t want to hurt me but over and over you have proved to me that this isn’t true. I have tried for so long to convince Lexi and myself that you are a good person and that she has no reason to worry but to be honest Reis, she is right. Someone who cares wouldn’t put me in a situation where I feel like I have to say yes. I am sorry, but I do not owe you, or any guy for that matter, anything. This is MY body. Not yours, not anyone else’s. It’s mine. It’s not fair to me and I hope you can see where I’m coming from. I hope you can

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