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She messaged him about the puppy. He was offering to give her the puppy for free because his parents told him that if he couldn’t get rid of the puppy it would have to go to the shelter because he already had three dogs at the time. My friend said she was interested in the puppy and that she had to talk to her grandma. My friend already knew there was no way her grandma would let her take the puppy. She took a chance and asked her grandma but she said no. Being the animal lover I am I felt really bad because I didn’t want to see the puppy go to the shelter. She’s also a pitbull so I knew it would be bad for the puppy. That day I went home and told my mom I knew a boy who was willing to give me a puppy for free. My mom actually said yes because …show more content…
She pretended that she was taking the dog and told the guy she would take the puppy for him. She was hoping that he would talk to her because she had his puppy but he never messaged her again after that. I named the puppy Xya. It’’s pronounced Ziyah. It was a mistake taking her because she chewed so many things up. Xya has anxiety. She always has to be with me when i’m home. My mom always tells me that she whines for about half an hour when I leave. One time when no one was home she went into the bathroom because some of my clothes were left in there and she accidentally shut the bathroom door on herself. She didn’t like being in there so she decided to get herself out. She chewed the whole bottom half of the door off to get out. Another time we went out chewed up a huge section of our carpet up. My mom got really upset and she has told me twice I needed to find Xya a new home She may have destroyed so many of my things but I don’t regret taking Xya one bit. Taking her might have been a mistake but she is my favorite one. This dog is so full of love and she’s always happy. She makes me smile everyday. She makes me happy and can make my day so much better. She has gotten so much better over the last

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