Personal Narrative : A Short Story : Ahaan And Panktie

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Ahaankti: Ahaan & Pankti I took a day off at work because of the pouring rain outside, so I am the only person in the house. The dark grey colored sky outside pushes light just far enough into the corners of my house to see my way to the living room without turning a light on. There is no chattering in the house because I am alone, no air conditioning hum, or no flickering fluorescent lights. I sit down slowly on the couch beside the window quietly thrilled at the novelty of being alone, absorbing the quiet, the empty spaces in the room, and watching the birds find its way to the nest. Just then I saw a rabbit outside and I can tell that rabbit had nowhere to go, so I went outside the door to help the rabbit. As I reached the place I saw a girl helping the rabbit for me. She had a kind of an understated beauty, perhaps it was because she was unaware of her prettiness. Her skin was flawless. I doubt she used any facial products. She was all about simplicity, making things easier, helping those around who were need of help. I think this is made her skin glow like a diamond. It was her inner beauty that lit her eyes and softened her features. I have to talk to her, she has something in her that makes her different from everyone. “Hello!, May I know know your name?”, I started the conversation with a straight up question, I thought to myself that I should have waited before I asked that. She replied with frightness in her voice, “Hey, we first need to take the rabbit to the

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