Passage #3 PEEEEL & Anchor Statement Upon booking the wrong course for swimming, the narrator immerses the reader in her consistently problematic experience. By integrating dialog when she reveals that “[She] can only swim with a snorkel” this adds an immersive factor into the writer’s shared experience because the reader is given insight into the author’s personal thoughts on the realization of her lack of ability to swim proficiently. Furthermore, the awkward adventurer expresses her uncertainty by asking herself “is now a good time to tell [the swimming instructor] that [the writer] is not good at swimming?” This once more, adds additional immersion factors by providing exposure on her emotional distress to the reader. Moreover, the dazzle
