When I was reading Naked, I got an idea of this essay which is trust. The writer …show more content…
The structure of article roughly same as Naked. The only different is that the writer used different persons in his essay. In the first person, the writer used eleven for his name. For this section, he just wanted to give a definition for himself. In the third person, he first used number sixteen. The “sixteen” in his water polo team was bench players. In this part , the reason why the writer played water polo was he wanted to be famous as the others players that people will pay attention to him. Unfortunately, he still could not find who he was. In the third section of this essay, the write draw into two person that outside of his story. It seems that they did not have any relationship between them and the writer. When I read this essay in the second time, I found that the writer wrote about this two person was just like the “boyfriend” and the “roommates” of Naked. Using the outside person is just for highlight the points that the writer wanted to …show more content…
The essay is about a son and a father. Writer and his father went to a lake which was in Maine to spend all the summer time during writer’s childhood. After writer became a father, he went to the lake with writer’s son. When E.B. white was writing this essay, he thought back for all those years. And tried to remember all the things that he and his father had done, and had seen. “Some of the other campers were in swimming, alone the shore, one of them with a soap.” Many years ago, there was always a man who will hold a soap swimming in the lake. But for this time, the man was right here in front of the write. Years of boundaries became blurred at this moment. In this atmosphere of strong feelings, the writer cannot distinguish the past and today. We should admire the writing technique that the writer used. The article structure is also similar to the Naked and Onamaewa, both of them are using the time order. From the top part of essay, the hidden information is the writer thought he was always is a little boy in his father’s eyes from “the boy sneak quietly out and go off along the shore in a boat.” Many years, the writer’s father was same as the writer for letting the son do whatever he wants to do which is tolerance and understanding. Time already passed, people must move on. The writer knew that he is not able to return his childhood, and also he is getting older that he