Nefreit And Deen: A Narrative Fiction

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I was surprised. We all went together, everything was going so well. Deen was calm, Nefreit was smiling and happy, Xetarr.. Perfect. He always was. From the day we met years, years, back, to now. Holding me close and smiling down at my form, as we moved through the haunted crowds. People hiding behind masks, girls screaming their way through the park, and guys laughing at them. Of course, I wasn't scared. Nefreit either, but, I mean, we would flinch and be pissed about it. But, that's just us. The thing that really sent chills down my spine, really, really did, was the chainsaw guy following us around. No blades upon the chainsaw, obviously, but he would follow us! It was annoying. With his hockey mask and weird rumbling laughter. It caused me to move closer to Xetarr, and he would laugh at my actions. I heard him doing so.. "So," Deen started, "We gonna go on the ride?"

"What ride?" I was confused.. A ride? Dude, this is a haunted theme park. Not Kings Island. "I want too! It's REALLY cool." Nefreit, I swear, spazzed. She turned so quickly towards me, I thought she was gonna hit me. Her smile was wide, as she talked with her hands. Left and right. "It's, like, huge." Deen chuckled; pervert. "You sit with one person and you go up along a hill and it rests there, before dropping you. Each time is different so you'll never know when it
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I couldn't help but to smile, really, I couldn't. As we parted ways from my friend and her Mr. Lover-Lover, we had more privacy. He began to spoke, "You know I love you, right..?" He sounded uncertain. It threw me off, big time. We've been together for four years.. He should know. Right? "Yeah, I do.. I can't explain my love, you know this." My voice was soft, as he slowed his walking. He fell silent, as he pushed open a door. A sign read, "Death's Candy Shop." Cheesy, I swear. The place was empty, no sign of life. Maybe it was Death's.. He took his hand from mine, it caused me to look up

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