As an educator I have always used simple sentences and abbreviations as I wrote notes for observation records and planning. Once I began studying with Curtin University, this needed to change to a more formal approach. I was disappointed with the errors in my writing that were assessed by my tutor in the first unit of study. As I believed I did a good effort but as I researched these errors I now understand the mistakes. Websites such as Paper Rater will allow me to analyze my problem areas. Proof reading and completing several drafts before final submission will also help me attain better academic writing skills. Writing a first draft, then editing what has been written, and proof reading your writing is multistep writing process that is required
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When writing my short passage for this unit, I thought it was satisfactory after several drafts. I then used the website ‘Paper Rater’ to analyze my writing and found errors that I did not even consider. Some of these errors included the use of transitional phrases and words that allow my sentences to flow more smoothly. However, I was able to receive 9% equal or better than students in my education level (www.paperrater.com). In addition to transitional words, it was also found that I should improve on the variety of my sentence beginnings. I also need to focus on writing in an active rather than the passive voice. As it is stated in Grellier and Goerke (2014, p. 165) “many teachers of writing recommend that you avoid the passive voice as much as possible”. Prior to this reflection, I did not know the difference between the two …show more content…
I am now analyzing my sentence structures and grammar as I write. Continuously practicing my writing and gaining feedback from the discussion board, as well as through smart thinking. By listening to this feedback will help me improve to become a more proficient writer, as I am continuously learning new skills. I will continue to use the online tools that assess my writing to gain more experience. Furthermore, I will ask for help when necessary from my tutors and other students among email or collaborate sessions. I will read and research textbooks that can assist me with being a better writer. Online help sites such as www.thedesk.org.au can also be useful when I might be
When writing my short passage for this unit, I thought it was satisfactory after several drafts. I then used the website ‘Paper Rater’ to analyze my writing and found errors that I did not even consider. Some of these errors included the use of transitional phrases and words that allow my sentences to flow more smoothly. However, I was able to receive 9% equal or better than students in my education level (www.paperrater.com). In addition to transitional words, it was also found that I should improve on the variety of my sentence beginnings. I also need to focus on writing in an active rather than the passive voice. As it is stated in Grellier and Goerke (2014, p. 165) “many teachers of writing recommend that you avoid the passive voice as much as possible”. Prior to this reflection, I did not know the difference between the two …show more content…
I am now analyzing my sentence structures and grammar as I write. Continuously practicing my writing and gaining feedback from the discussion board, as well as through smart thinking. By listening to this feedback will help me improve to become a more proficient writer, as I am continuously learning new skills. I will continue to use the online tools that assess my writing to gain more experience. Furthermore, I will ask for help when necessary from my tutors and other students among email or collaborate sessions. I will read and research textbooks that can assist me with being a better writer. Online help sites such as www.thedesk.org.au can also be useful when I might be