Joe says “Their two most infuriating demands are The University must remove names of all white supremacists off of the buildings on campus named after them and the university must create a room in the Ferguson Student Center for colored people only.” As previously stated, the fact that Joe is a white male weakens his point of view on this issue. Some readers might argue that Joe isn’t adequately expressing the views of this organization because he is so passionate and angered by it. To be effective in this case he could have quoted verbatim the list of demands posed by the We are Done movement. But Joe redeems his previous statement by using a source that has an opposing view that Minority students don’t have a place to feel safe on campus. By his use of this source from Al.com he lessens the slant in his paper and effectively argues both points of
Joe says “Their two most infuriating demands are The University must remove names of all white supremacists off of the buildings on campus named after them and the university must create a room in the Ferguson Student Center for colored people only.” As previously stated, the fact that Joe is a white male weakens his point of view on this issue. Some readers might argue that Joe isn’t adequately expressing the views of this organization because he is so passionate and angered by it. To be effective in this case he could have quoted verbatim the list of demands posed by the We are Done movement. But Joe redeems his previous statement by using a source that has an opposing view that Minority students don’t have a place to feel safe on campus. By his use of this source from Al.com he lessens the slant in his paper and effectively argues both points of