Dr. O’Conner really likes this method of introducing different sources. For a lot of the materials that I wanted to use, I did not like the use of sandwiching. Although I understood the use of it, I found this method too conventional and repetitive. It was as if the form was identical throughout the paper, and having to read this paper over and over, I found that because of the form, the paper seemed bland at times because the structure was easily foreshadowed. After I finished drafting this paper, I printed it out and cut each paragraph out. With these pieces, I creatively restructured my paper. I felt that there were ideas that I repeated, even with the outline, and I had to reorder the paragraphs so that the paper was not repetitive. I think that this also creatively allow me to authoritatively make my essay flow the way I want it to, and I felt like I had all the power in my
Dr. O’Conner really likes this method of introducing different sources. For a lot of the materials that I wanted to use, I did not like the use of sandwiching. Although I understood the use of it, I found this method too conventional and repetitive. It was as if the form was identical throughout the paper, and having to read this paper over and over, I found that because of the form, the paper seemed bland at times because the structure was easily foreshadowed. After I finished drafting this paper, I printed it out and cut each paragraph out. With these pieces, I creatively restructured my paper. I felt that there were ideas that I repeated, even with the outline, and I had to reorder the paragraphs so that the paper was not repetitive. I think that this also creatively allow me to authoritatively make my essay flow the way I want it to, and I felt like I had all the power in my