At the beginning of this semester I knew I was not the greatest writer, however, I never thought I was a horrible writer. In this semester Professor K. Jagasia had given the class a syllabus that stated expected student learning objectives. Between both classes, English 1001 and English 0920, there was a total of twenty learning outcomes. Within these outcomes I believe I was able to accomplish them all. Although, I have learned many things in my high school English classes, however I was able to comprehend the information more clearly. As I was going over an assignment that was given at the beginning of the semester I was able to recognize majority of the mistakes I have had throughout it. Although I am not the prefect writer I will now know
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In the syllabus given to the class the first day, there was a bold heading called expected student learning outcomes. Throughout this bolded heading, I believe there has been a result of all twenty of these outcomes. For an example, one of the outcomes was organize and develop ideas effectively and logically in essays. Throughout the semester I was able to make my papers more organized and develop more ideas to put into my assignments. Therefore, I was able to not only complete the assignment, but I was able to reach the necessary length. At the beginning of the semester I did not come into the class knowing the rights and the wrong of plagiarism, but by the end of the semester I was able to complete a paper without plagiarism. This this being said, I will still have to go back and look to make sure that I am putting my sources in correctly so I do not get punished for it. Even though I believe that I have accomplished these outcomes, I may at times need a little assistance in the …show more content…
For an example, here is ten lines that has been corrected in the diagnostic paragraph. Throughout many households, families believe in eating the right foods and trying to stay as healthy as much as much as possible. Some families may use oils that are made from various kinds of plants. For an example, Young Living is a company who makes these kinds of oils. With is being said, this company has various different oils that could help with sickness, pain, smells, sunburns, and etcetera. On the other hand, these oils may not work all the time either. For instance, someone who’s breathing is not the greatest, the oils may help, but they also may not, it all depends on the circumstances as well. another example, is someone with arthritis in the body. With this being said, by rubbing the oils in the skin where the pain is located, the oils may take away some of the pain. Within these ten lines, there has been many mistakes that have been corrected. It is important to know the mistakes that are being made while writing, and if one does not then that is prof there is room for
In the syllabus given to the class the first day, there was a bold heading called expected student learning outcomes. Throughout this bolded heading, I believe there has been a result of all twenty of these outcomes. For an example, one of the outcomes was organize and develop ideas effectively and logically in essays. Throughout the semester I was able to make my papers more organized and develop more ideas to put into my assignments. Therefore, I was able to not only complete the assignment, but I was able to reach the necessary length. At the beginning of the semester I did not come into the class knowing the rights and the wrong of plagiarism, but by the end of the semester I was able to complete a paper without plagiarism. This this being said, I will still have to go back and look to make sure that I am putting my sources in correctly so I do not get punished for it. Even though I believe that I have accomplished these outcomes, I may at times need a little assistance in the …show more content…
For an example, here is ten lines that has been corrected in the diagnostic paragraph. Throughout many households, families believe in eating the right foods and trying to stay as healthy as much as much as possible. Some families may use oils that are made from various kinds of plants. For an example, Young Living is a company who makes these kinds of oils. With is being said, this company has various different oils that could help with sickness, pain, smells, sunburns, and etcetera. On the other hand, these oils may not work all the time either. For instance, someone who’s breathing is not the greatest, the oils may help, but they also may not, it all depends on the circumstances as well. another example, is someone with arthritis in the body. With this being said, by rubbing the oils in the skin where the pain is located, the oils may take away some of the pain. Within these ten lines, there has been many mistakes that have been corrected. It is important to know the mistakes that are being made while writing, and if one does not then that is prof there is room for