Do you think we need a dress codes? Kids shouldn’t have dress codes because they are all mainly for the girls and really none are for boys. Girls shouldn’t be able to wear crop tops to school. They also shouldn’t wear anything that shows their stomach at all. The girls should be allowed to wear leggings without a long enough shirt. Kids shouldn’t be dress coded for things that aren’t dress codes.
No!!In elementary school, we had no dress codes, we got to choose what we got to wear. If you get dressed coded in middle school you have to go up front and call the office and suffer the consciousness of calling your mom and dad. Then your mom and dad have gone back home and get you more clothes. We don't need a dress code in middle schools. Girls …show more content…
We need to wear appropriate things to school. We should be aloud to wear leggings without a long enough shirt. In my perspective we do not need dress codes. It is just to much because if you get dress coded you with have to change, and that could mess up your grade. We don’t need dress codes.
Thesis Statement Guide Results
Thesis Statement Model #1: Sample Thesis Statement
Girls shouldn't need dress code.
Thesis Statement Model #2: Thesis with Concession
Notice that this model makes a concession by addressing an argument from the opposing viewpoint first, and then uses the phrase "even though" and states the writer's opinion/main idea as a rebuttal.
Even though We don't need dress code in middle schools., Girls shouldn't need dress code.
Thesis Statement Model #3: Thesis with Reasons
Here, the use of "because" reveals the reasons behind the writer's opinion/main idea.
Girls shouldn't need dress code. because We know what we should and shouldn't wear to school., We should actually have the privilege like the boys., and I don't want dress code because we should get the privilege to wear what
No!!In elementary school, we had no dress codes, we got to choose what we got to wear. If you get dressed coded in middle school you have to go up front and call the office and suffer the consciousness of calling your mom and dad. Then your mom and dad have gone back home and get you more clothes. We don't need a dress code in middle schools. Girls …show more content…
We need to wear appropriate things to school. We should be aloud to wear leggings without a long enough shirt. In my perspective we do not need dress codes. It is just to much because if you get dress coded you with have to change, and that could mess up your grade. We don’t need dress codes.
Thesis Statement Guide Results
Thesis Statement Model #1: Sample Thesis Statement
Girls shouldn't need dress code.
Thesis Statement Model #2: Thesis with Concession
Notice that this model makes a concession by addressing an argument from the opposing viewpoint first, and then uses the phrase "even though" and states the writer's opinion/main idea as a rebuttal.
Even though We don't need dress code in middle schools., Girls shouldn't need dress code.
Thesis Statement Model #3: Thesis with Reasons
Here, the use of "because" reveals the reasons behind the writer's opinion/main idea.
Girls shouldn't need dress code. because We know what we should and shouldn't wear to school., We should actually have the privilege like the boys., and I don't want dress code because we should get the privilege to wear what