Ecstasy: A Narrative Fiction

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I float in a sea of nothingness feeling numb as if every part of my body has fallen asleep. You would think that emptiness would be dark, but it's a drab grey. I float here for what might have been 5 minutes or even 5 days I wouldn't be able to tell you. "Am... I dead " I wonder out loud, I try to remember what happened but everything is a blur, I remember a colorful light, a key, guns firing and me jumping into what looks like a wall of light.

Nothing that runs though my head makes sense. The few things I can remember are distorted and most of my memories are missing. My mind is filled with random thoughts and shards of emotions, remenents of a life I can no longer remember. I groan in frustration. ' why can't I remember anything!' I look up and I see a pinprick of white in the sea of gray.

The light's ghostly glow get brighter and brighter illuminating the drab gray with its warm aura. A euphoric feeling fills my chest causing me to almost cry in ecstasy. But the happiness I felt was not meant to last, and I gasp as black icy tendrils grab me and pull me down away from the light. "No!! " I scream squirming and trying to pull away trying to pull towards the light. I hear a hissing voice that echo throughout the air. That resonates with the very core of my being. "The world is not finished with you yet"
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The sun glints of the metal 'gear' that I'm wearing. Suddenly my body is struck with an electric-like feeliing that makes me shake and shiver, the pain in my head starts to fade and my vision clears and I look around. The air around me is shimmering as if It was ashphalt on a hot summers day and a glowing symbol has a red smoldering glow on the ground. I start to build up the strength to get to my feet slowly as memories fill my mind and suddenly the flow of thoughts stops ubruptly

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