1. Identify and describe three strengths in this draft?
You did a great job with the visuals. I could see your small village and people riding around on their snow-gos trying to make it to the PO. You did a great job of building up suspense. I could not wait till you got those black boots and how the character would react to getting the package. Your story flowed nicely from beginning to end. You gave enough backstory that the reader could understand were you setting was taking place and who the characters were.
2. Identify and describe three weaknesses in this draft?
Yes, your story was a bit disturbing, a person delighted at killing animals is always a delicate subject. Your story goes for the shock value, and you did this very well. This
You did a great job with the visuals. I could see your small village and people riding around on their snow-gos trying to make it to the PO. You did a great job of building up suspense. I could not wait till you got those black boots and how the character would react to getting the package. Your story flowed nicely from beginning to end. You gave enough backstory that the reader could understand were you setting was taking place and who the characters were.
2. Identify and describe three weaknesses in this draft?
Yes, your story was a bit disturbing, a person delighted at killing animals is always a delicate subject. Your story goes for the shock value, and you did this very well. This