Creative Writing: Negans

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He swung Lucille over and over, every time it landed I jolted knowing that it was another one of my friends being slaughtered. What was this feeling? It was complete helplessness kneeling on the ground with our heads hung in shame, none of use could don anything. Two of our friends,no, two of my family members, gone. He taunted the group as we all sobbed, another feeling rose in my chest, it was a stormy buzz,anger. "I'm going to kill you." Rick said, almost to quiet for me to hear.Negans faced dropped in shock.He knelt down to get on Ricks level."What?I didnt quite catch that you're going to have to speak up."Not today, not tomorrow, but I'm going to kill you." Rick said, It came out in gasps. I knelt forward and tried to block out the exchange, …show more content…
I could tell Rick was not on to give in, but he had to, and I could see the new look in his eyes,he was broken. He told the group he would be back. He had Daryl, that was his bargaining tool, he officially owned Alexandria and everyone who lived there. His group began to file out, I looked at the one person left, I stared in horror as they took photos of my friends corpses. "Hold on." Negan yelled, everyone stared in horror as Negan turned around. "What's your name?"He pointed Lucille at me. I stayed silent. "You really want to lose someone else?" He asked with a dark smirk."Heaven" I said looking him straight in the eyes, not daring to break eye contact. "Throw her in with Daryl." He yelled.Everyone looking to Rick, knowing he wouldn't be able to stop this from happening, I simply gave him a weak smile and nodded Goodbye. While Dwight came up to me and dragged me to the truck. Landing next to Daryl with a thud, he sobbed even harder. It was too painful to see him like this so I rolled to my side and curled into a ball. The metal door swung open, Negan peeped his head in with a grin "Don't worry baby girl, I'm not going to hurt you." he was going to pull away when he leaned back and whispered "Well not too

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