Creative Writing: Hunter's Cabin

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We arrived at the lake mid-afternoon. It was one last hoorah before we all separated, to go to school. I ran into the cabin with excitement. I claimed my room first. There was no way I was getting last pick. Last time I can to the cabin with the wrestlers, I had to share a room. By the end of the weekend it smelt like stale urine. Never again! I claimed my room then, headed into the living room to find Hunter Cole sitting on the couch. I hate him! Personally he didn’t do anything to me, but he played with my friends and hurt them. So, I hate him. “Hunter,” I said, with a lot of distaste. “Geeze Devin, you must have forgot your happy pills today,” Hunter remarked. “I wish!” “Calm down sweetheart, what did I do to deserve all your hostility?” …show more content…
Then, he said to me “Wake up, sunshine.” I threw the bow at his face, but I missed. The Peeps scattered all over the ground. “Oops,” I smiled. “Look what you just did,” exploded Hunter. “I’m sorry,” i managed to squeak out. “You just wasted a box of perfectly good Peeps!” “They are sugary marshmallows. They are replaceable!” I was so fed up with that jerk I didn’t notice that the rest of the boys had left. Hunter stood up to leave, but I needed to ask him a question. So, I blurted out, “What is your obsession with Peeps anyways?”
“When I was little my grandpa brought me Peeps every time he visited. I used to do everything with my grandpa. Then last year he passed away. Peeps make me feel like I have my grandpa back.”
It made me smile to think that the big bad wrestler had a heart. It was the first time he had ever opened up to me. We sat in silence for a while, until I finally got the nerve to ask one question. “Why did you kiss me Hunter?”
“Huh”
“You know what I said.”
“I don’t know it just came over me. I felt like I needed to tell you to shut up somehow.”
“Did it really have to involve all that tongue?”
He laughed, at least I could make the situation less serious.
“What can I say, that’s just the way I

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