Creative Writing: Amber Intered Room

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Shyanne Padgett
As Amber intered room she felt a coldness enter into her slender body causing shivers to run up her spine like the feeling of thousands of baby spiders running across your flesh. The room was dark and creepily colder than all the other rooms in the house. Immediately, a thought entered into her mind, “His name is Skotádi.” She looked around the chilling dark room and could feel the evilness seeping into her. She then saw what seemed to be a dark figure in the coroner. He looked human enough, but he oozed with evilness like he came straight from Hell. He opened his eyes revealing red glowing circles glaring into her soul and extracting her memories one by one, evaluating who she was and his plans for her. She seemed to hear a hissing noise like a snake and human
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Back on Earth she was not going to be missed, and hardly anyone would realize she was missing. She had been forgot about years ago. Kólasi continued talking, “You have already called upon your mentor. In your dreams you call for him. You have called upon him without even knowing it. Each time you wished to get away from your Hell-on -Earth his bond to you become stronger until finally, the bond was inseparable. We have watched you for years waiting for the right time to get you away from that place. Here you will be happy. No one to bother you, no one to tell you no, and no one will ever forget you. Ah! Here is your mentor now. Skotádi come in here please!” Skotádi entered quietly and shyly not sure of what was to happen. As Kólasi motioned for him to come close he started whispering in Skotádi’s ear. Skotádi all of a sudden ran over and grasped Amber’s hand for dear life and pulled her into a room. He motioned for her to lay down on the table and he guided a drink onto her lips. She sipped weakly and her eyes began to blur. Skotádi whispered in her ear “Everything will be okay…” and she was

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