Creative Writing: A Fictional Narrative

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“What are you going to do?” he asked. I’m not sure,” she muttered. “I need more time.” “Well let me know when you decide,” he replied, turning his back on her. “Okay I will let you know when I decide,” she promised him. “Did you find out your answer yet?” he replied harshly. “Yes I’m babysitting my sister tonight.” she replied. “Okay,” he said. “Why do you need me or something?” she asked. “No,” he said. “Then why did you keep asking me everyday what I was doing?” she asked “ Because I felt like it.” he said harshly. “Well you didn’t have to freak out”, she said. “Yes I know.” the boy said while screaming. “You know it isn’t nice to scream”. the girl said. The boy and her kept fighting and they both finally said “Let's just …show more content…
She became very upset because she said a boy has never cared for her as much as he does. The months passed and she hadn't talked to him since that day and she felt pretty weird about it. So she decided to go knock on his door, which was 20 miles away from his house. She didn’t have a car or bike at the time, so she decided to just walk 20 minutes to his house. She got there and saw that his car wasn’t home so she walked back, and as soon as she walked back she started to feel a little worried. The neighbor told her that she hadn’t saw the boy in forever, his car hasn’t been home for …show more content…
The girl was so surprised she said her name because the woman always seemed so rude when she and the boy would hang out. “Ugh I just need to find him”. she said “Sometimes good things come to an end.” Debbie said. “Yes I know, but it sucks because it sucks.” the girl said.
So another month went by and the girl was super upset. She didn't know where to look she didn't how to make herself feel better. After all the boy had been the one to always make her feel better. She made a goal that she will find him no matter how many days, months, weeks, seconds, hours, minutes, and years. She didn't care whatever it would take she would do it. It crazy how you develop feelings for somebody and then one day there are nowhere to be found. A year passed and she still didn't see him. This may sound really weird, but she even wanted to go to his house and take things to remind her of him. She was just so heartbroken, she kept trying to think of a plan to find him, but she couldn't think of one. She even called his parents. Heck, they couldn't even find him, which is pretty darn sad. “Hello?” a voice said “Hi.” said the girl “It’s the boy's neighbor, you remember me right?” “Yes the girl said I haven't seen you around for almost 2 years

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