Compare And Contrast Baseball And Mother Hen

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When you compare the Mother Hen article and the Baseball article, there is a obvious better article. For one thing, Mother Hen has no spelling errors. Whereas the Baseball article gets the reader confused because it address the article will be about basketball, and then goes on and on about baseball. Then, there is the reasons. In the Mother Hen article, there are five clear reasons and evidence with only one reasons being non-logical. Then with the Baseball article, it only has three reasons and only one of them has good, logical evidence. That is 80% versus a ruffly 33%. That is a 57% difference, in Mother hen article's favor! As a whole, the Mother Hen article is better because the Baseball article's issue is for high school athletes and

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