Catellina's Walk Away: A Narrative Fiction

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As her mother walked through the door Catellina felt a breeze on my boiling cheeks. Her brother jumped in her arms and told her he missed her. Her sister smiled, hugged her and told her how happy she was to see her again. Without any acknowledgement from her, apart from an empty stare through the wooden walls Catellina walked away, knowing she had a right not to have faith in her mother anymore. As she walked away from the person she would have done anything for. Her inside burned and evaporated the only evidence that would have shown that she is equally happy to see her beloved. Night went by and her eyes could not shut. Although her mother was finally home for good, Catellina couldn’t stop tossing and turning in her bed. How could everyone forget how their mother had abandoned them, she thought to herself. BIPBIPBIP! 6:45. English, Math, Gym and Science everything was packed and ready to go. It was time for what allowed her to escape her hot fort, taking care of the two little kittens. As she walked up the stairs, her eyes were barely capable of opening. She lifted her heavy arm to place it on the ramp in case her legs let her body fall and end up where she started. Lights were already on, she wondered who …show more content…
But deep inside she didn’t know what to want anymore. After six months that’s what she taught herself to do. At school she didn’t bother to pretend everything was going great in her life because even if it would be true, she wouldn’t know how to act. When she came back from school her brother was sitting in front of the television watching his favourite movie, Despicable me. Everyone sees it as such a funny movie; but all I saw, was a movie with three kids looking for parents who are ready to take care of them. In order for them to stick together the older sister takes care of her sisters. That’s it nothing funny about that. I closed the screen and told my brother to do his

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