Becoming A Scholarship Essay

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“Your generosity is greatly appreciated!” I was staring straight at the bright glare of the GoFundMe webpage for my Meadowmount attendance tuition.
I started the cello at the age of 8, and I have been passionate about music ever since. The instrument has gotten me to go to different places around America and I had the privilege of experiencing them. I look towards being a music major in the future.
However, a financial issue is preventing me from enjoying an entirely new experience.
Our family has been relying on donations every since the beginning of May to pay off the tuition of $6,800. Every night, I restlessly just blankly stare at my fundraiser page, wondering if I would be getting any more. The parents reluctantly jump back and forth on whether I would be able to make it or not. As anxiety built up in my head, so did my excitement.
On the morning of a cloudy June morning, I am overjoyed to hear that our fundraiser had been successful, and I would be able to pursue my passion as a young cellist.
As the family SUV parks on the gravelly terrain of the school, an excited me grasps onto my cello case. This is a new beginning for me as I would spend the next seven weeks of my life in the remote area of the Adirondack Mountains. With barely any cell service to connect with friends back
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All students must wake up at 7 AM to an unappetizing breakfast then walk a set distance back for the real challenge. The student stays in their dorm practicing for the next 4 hours, all of it being supervised by the sharp ear of the counselor. Coming from a high school background, I have never felt more pain than before while trying to clean up a melodic run from a concerto. School back home limits my practice time to a maximum of 2 hours, and transitioning myself into the world of practice and students that were way better than I am was one of the toughest realities to

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