In my revision of my Assignment #4 I did not feel the need to change much. I added words or phrases throughout the paper that would make it sound better. I also added why The Central Building was named after William Beardshear, this is located at the end of the first paragraph in the first section titled, “History of Beardshear Hall.”
I decided to take out some things. I took out unnecessary words/phrases. An example of one of the phrases I deleted is: “The overall layout and design of Beardshear Hall is hard to describe.” This is just a filler sentence that has no meaning to my paper. I took out most, if not all, of these ambiguous statements. I also deleted some of the history in the introduction. The history is covered in the next section
I decided to take out some things. I took out unnecessary words/phrases. An example of one of the phrases I deleted is: “The overall layout and design of Beardshear Hall is hard to describe.” This is just a filler sentence that has no meaning to my paper. I took out most, if not all, of these ambiguous statements. I also deleted some of the history in the introduction. The history is covered in the next section