Eddison Ma
Ms. Kekelis
Language Arts 8M4
15 March 2016
Title
“Hey!” A strong, effective, low- voice squealed over the towering skyscrapers, beyond the baseball court with numerous people. Everyone was curious where the sound materialized from. We recognize that there was a dilapidated, undiscovered house. It seemed the house was protruding because of its size and quality. A man wearing a white T- shirt, cerulean jeans, and a pair of cracked slippers expeditiously dashed over here. He held a baseball in his hand. I knew that I was in excessive trouble. I accidentally hit the ball too hard. The ball flew tremendously high in the sky, travelled around the baseball field. “Bang!” A crisp, broken sound of the glass resounded through the whole city. …show more content…
We started a conversation. All of a sudden, we felt dehydrated and ravenous. My stomach roars like a lion. My friends were all shocked by the sound. Everyone laughed. We decided to buy some drinks and food. We went in the yellow sign with the word “ M” on it. All of us like to eat Mcdonalds. As we finished our delicious meal. I recognized that we didn’t have enough baseballs for the game. I went to the nearest sports store to buy. At the time that I bought the balls. I went to the baseball court in my own. I arrived late, everyone was waiting. “Let’s start the game!” Someone shouted.
The baseball game with shouting and enthusiasm.
Everybody was in their positions ready for battle. We are all good to play. No one was debilitated. When the baseball game was half- way through, a lot of people walked by. We were determined to stop the game and settle a while. It was 1 o’clock in the afternoon. My friends and I sat on the green green, fresh grass. The comfortable grass and the cold breeze wind blew over my face as I lay on the ground. I unintentionally fell asleep. A forbearance sound traveling through my ears and goes into my brain.
“Wake up! Wake up!”, my friends calling “ It’s raining!"
I felt the raindrops like needles in the sky. As the raindrops run through my eyes, i was awake. Unexpectedly, the rains fall harder and harder. The amount of rain looks like it is going to …show more content…
Next batter is me. “ I’m ready to hit a homerun!” Shouting with lots of enthusiasm.
When the ball threw from the pitcher’s hand. I stared at the ball very concentratedly, decided not to look at nothing else. I can see the ball flew away from his finger. 3.2.1. Ball is out. I used the whole power I had. “BING” The ball flew high in the sky, nearly hit the airplane.
“ Homerun! Homerun! It’s a homerun!” We shouted.
I had a bad feeling that something huge is going to happen. Then “ BANG!” A crisp, broken sound. Everyone heard the sound. We didn’t know what to do next. Do we stay or run? While we are thinking which way do we choose. The screaming dissemination over the sidewalks. I was scared. The man was shouting at us while rushing through the sidewalk. I knew what is he going to say. “ Pay the money.” Of course. I had already decided to pat the broken window. Some of my friends told me that they will pay too. Some of them will help me clean his house. “ Thank you for helping me.” I
Ms. Kekelis
Language Arts 8M4
15 March 2016
Title
“Hey!” A strong, effective, low- voice squealed over the towering skyscrapers, beyond the baseball court with numerous people. Everyone was curious where the sound materialized from. We recognize that there was a dilapidated, undiscovered house. It seemed the house was protruding because of its size and quality. A man wearing a white T- shirt, cerulean jeans, and a pair of cracked slippers expeditiously dashed over here. He held a baseball in his hand. I knew that I was in excessive trouble. I accidentally hit the ball too hard. The ball flew tremendously high in the sky, travelled around the baseball field. “Bang!” A crisp, broken sound of the glass resounded through the whole city. …show more content…
We started a conversation. All of a sudden, we felt dehydrated and ravenous. My stomach roars like a lion. My friends were all shocked by the sound. Everyone laughed. We decided to buy some drinks and food. We went in the yellow sign with the word “ M” on it. All of us like to eat Mcdonalds. As we finished our delicious meal. I recognized that we didn’t have enough baseballs for the game. I went to the nearest sports store to buy. At the time that I bought the balls. I went to the baseball court in my own. I arrived late, everyone was waiting. “Let’s start the game!” Someone shouted.
The baseball game with shouting and enthusiasm.
Everybody was in their positions ready for battle. We are all good to play. No one was debilitated. When the baseball game was half- way through, a lot of people walked by. We were determined to stop the game and settle a while. It was 1 o’clock in the afternoon. My friends and I sat on the green green, fresh grass. The comfortable grass and the cold breeze wind blew over my face as I lay on the ground. I unintentionally fell asleep. A forbearance sound traveling through my ears and goes into my brain.
“Wake up! Wake up!”, my friends calling “ It’s raining!"
I felt the raindrops like needles in the sky. As the raindrops run through my eyes, i was awake. Unexpectedly, the rains fall harder and harder. The amount of rain looks like it is going to …show more content…
Next batter is me. “ I’m ready to hit a homerun!” Shouting with lots of enthusiasm.
When the ball threw from the pitcher’s hand. I stared at the ball very concentratedly, decided not to look at nothing else. I can see the ball flew away from his finger. 3.2.1. Ball is out. I used the whole power I had. “BING” The ball flew high in the sky, nearly hit the airplane.
“ Homerun! Homerun! It’s a homerun!” We shouted.
I had a bad feeling that something huge is going to happen. Then “ BANG!” A crisp, broken sound. Everyone heard the sound. We didn’t know what to do next. Do we stay or run? While we are thinking which way do we choose. The screaming dissemination over the sidewalks. I was scared. The man was shouting at us while rushing through the sidewalk. I knew what is he going to say. “ Pay the money.” Of course. I had already decided to pat the broken window. Some of my friends told me that they will pay too. Some of them will help me clean his house. “ Thank you for helping me.” I