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I’m not gonna lie, this is one of the best time essay that I ever wrote. Out of all the timed essay I had wrote, this one have the highest score. I didn’t have much to struggle while trying to write this essay. I plan out my introduction and my thesis statement so that I can properly answer what the prompt is saying. Looking back at the prompt, I’m surprised that I even manage to answer the prompt consider how confusing the prompt is. I manage to included 3 body paragraphs with evidences that support my claims, and I finished the whole essay with a well-written conclusion. I was well prepared for this essay and my work pretty much shows it off. The thing that prevented me from failing this exam was that the story of Othello was

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