The only thing that this essay is lacking is that it doesn’t touch on the opposing side. To make this essay stronger, the writer should have made points that the opposing side would have made and explained how those points are logically or historically not accurate. For example, instead of just saying why such maritime superstitions should be taken seriously and backing them up, Cordle could have presented us with the reasons why people don’t believe in these superstitions and point out the flaws in the reasoning of the opposing side instead of presenting us few of the superstitions and providing evidence to prove it. Cordle writes, “Is maritime superstion really so irrational? Does it make a difference? No, it is not so irrational, as most superstitious fears can be backed by logical human responses.” (Cordle
The only thing that this essay is lacking is that it doesn’t touch on the opposing side. To make this essay stronger, the writer should have made points that the opposing side would have made and explained how those points are logically or historically not accurate. For example, instead of just saying why such maritime superstitions should be taken seriously and backing them up, Cordle could have presented us with the reasons why people don’t believe in these superstitions and point out the flaws in the reasoning of the opposing side instead of presenting us few of the superstitions and providing evidence to prove it. Cordle writes, “Is maritime superstion really so irrational? Does it make a difference? No, it is not so irrational, as most superstitious fears can be backed by logical human responses.” (Cordle