1984 Reflection Paper

1984 Reflection

Have you ever thought of a government controlling your life? And every step you take? Can't do anything that you want, not having the freedom to even have a mistress. Well the book 1984 have this type of government, they have to live in a secret, the government was called big brother, and they had an eye of everyone and what they did they were so controlled i think it would get annoying.
If i were to re-write the 1984 essay some things i would do differently would be, Organizing my paper better, I kind of just threw it all together as a last minute thing. I should of wrote a rough draft first and then wrote my actual paper it would have flowed a lot better, and probably made a lot of more sense. I also could of made a list of all the things i wanted my paper to have in it, like key points, main ideas, what the book was about, main …show more content…
I wrote it a few days were due, and it got all jumbled together and when i was writing it i forgot what i was going to talk about in my paper. so that's what i would have changed, next time we have a paper due i definitely will not be waiting until the last possible day to write it. It was very stupid of me because I know i am capable of writing a decent paper, i'm just too lazy too, and that is going to change, because I actually do want to start trying to improve my writing skills. I actually enjoy writing papers because i have so many thoughts i just want to write them down, but my problem is that I don't know how to organize them to make the paper flow. I remember in 3rd or 4th grade we did the paper organizer and it honestly helped me a lot, we did little bullet points of what we were going to talk about and we would list the main points and it made my paper a lot