Building on these concepts, in 1305 I wanted to challenge myself, by improving my transitions, writing in the correct tense and the overall flow of my paper from beginning to end. A few of the areas that Dr. Montoya identified …show more content…
Within, this section of the Podcast I was attempting to create credibility by means of showing the knowledge gained in two of the classes I have taken as part of the degree I am pursuing in Finance. I was able to tie this section into a statement that I made in the previous logos section to provide clarification trying to create common ground. Previously, I had spoken about high cost to open in underserved areas, this is easy to establish common ground as we all understand that we want to make money not lose