Personal Narrative-My First Baseball Tournament

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I was in Boise Idaho in a tournament sponsored by Adidas. This was also my first soccer tournament with a traveling soccer team, called “ IF Bluebirdz.” My dad and my mom with my brother had come with me. I was a the mide in the team, which meant I was never doing nothing. The tournament was international, so the teams were top quality and they were. My team had been practicing non stop for this tournament, even though it was the first one of the season.

We were ten mins aways from the soccer complex so we would always go to the store. My favorite store was Nike Factory. I remember it was orange building grey in the front and it was huge. I bought some shoes called,”Roshi's.” My shoes were black with a red Nike sign they were really nice and comfortable. Nike Factory was the last store we went to then after that we went to our hotel. My
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It was a big pool that was blue with three pools to get out of the pool. When I walked in I could smell all the chemicals in the pool. Next to the blue pool was a red jacuzzi. You could see the steam coming out of the water as all the bubbles arose like if the water was boiling water.
I wanted to get so bad but I was going to play in about a hour. I’d tell myself,” Do it for the team Zamora”. So I didn’t get in.
My brother was with other boys in the pool playing shark attack almost the whole time. When they were playing one kid hit his head against the steps to get out of the pool. The pool had a little bit of red in it. He had cut his forehead and everyone had to get out.

After that my brother said he didn’t want to swim in blood so we left to the game. We went to our room upstairs. I remember my mom saying,”Let me shower real quick”. But like always she took the time of her life. When she got a hour had past, she hadn’t even got out of the bathroom the entire time. She had all of her makeup she only need to get dressed. Once she got dressed we left to the

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